Re: Writing 201 – Water ( Storm )

2 thoughts on “Re: Writing 201 – Water ( Storm )”

  1. interesting thought that something that can be both full or bare could be an oasis. One comment on your form is that you went 5-7-7 instead of 5-7-5, but sometimes, writing poetry can also be about *breaking* the rules.

    1. Yeah I wrote it faster and kind of got a little bit confused halfway through and started thinking of the wrong thing. Thanks Bryan.

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